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    Rob Palmer
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    Default Sawhill Ponds, Boulder

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    I captured this last night. A nice dynamic sky with the best foreground I could find.

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    Robert Amoruso
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    Hi Rob,

    Nice to see you here. Our panos can now be posted at 1024 wide (800 high max).

    Great looking sky and I like the strip of mountains in the BG and the treed shoreline in the middle ground balancing it out. Wondering if a bit more of the lake might have been appropriate.

    I downloaded the image and tried a Shadow/Highlight recovery on the treeline. I feel it added a nice luminosity to the image and you might wish to investigate that.

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    You have a strong image here. I agree wuth Robert that a bit more water on the bottom would add to the overall otherwise nice image.

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    I'm inclined to agree with Robert, especially with his comments on framing and on the overall dark tone of the image. A slight curves adjustment to separate the shadows from the medium-dark tones would be helpful.

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