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    Jill Davis
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    Sometimes we actually get an awesome image out of pure luck!!!! This was taken yesterday morning early when the Fish Crows were leaving their night resting place on Tampa Bay. Thank you Mr Shadle for an awesome day yesterday on the Hooptie Deux!

    D50, 70-300 at 200mm, f/5,6, 1/3s, +0.3EV, ISO 400

    thanks for looking and comments and critiques are appreciated.

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    Julie Kenward
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    That is one sweet blur, Jill! My only comment would be to clone out that dark spot in the URC. It looks like you have the tail edge of a cloud there and it looks a bit incomplete.

    The colors in this are awesome!!!!

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    Gus Cobos
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    Nicely done Lady Jill.
    I like it very much. I like the soft pastel hues in the sky and the soft brush blur of the bird's wings...good show...I can see that you guys had a blast...congrats...say hello to the Doctor...:D:cool:

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    Fabs Forns
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    Trylu beautiful, Jill. I'd also clone out the dark sopt in the right corner (Upper).
    See you Monday :)

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    Alfred Forns
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    Agree with suggestions and would like to see the birds with a little more density Beautiful image Jill !!!!

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    This is lovelly-so soft and subtle with wonderful color. Agree about the dark spot and contrast- just a bit more? The trails behind the birds might show up better....

    But great "as is" too.

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    Love the colors but you needed another two stops of shutter speed for my taste. The birds are simply too blurred for me. I do love when those crows go!
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