I like the moment and pose, sharpness is not bad, but the bussy BG is distracting, light it too harsh and the whole image looks a bit cold due to the automatic whilte balance, you might try to take away some of the noise too. Still, as said, the moment is very nice and the head turn is good! Congratulations!
HI Ted Fully agree with Ramon The bg water is overpowering Something you can try is turning the image upside down!!!! Do look for all options when making he image. Will post below just turned around, further work will enhance it !!!