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Thread: Plenty of "THE" word done............

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    Jeni Williams
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    Default Plenty of "THE" word done............

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    After this I sincerely hope that darn cl. stamp gets permanently stuck!!!!:(:(

    Canon 40D Focal length 420mm
    F/5.6
    Exp time 1/800sec
    Exp comp. -1step.

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    Julie Kenward
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    Nice one, Jeni! I would have liked to have seen a little further down on the flower and a little less above the bird's head. You also have a few hot spots in the white areas - shooting your photos in Raw format will help you to recover those and tone them back down. Overall it's a very pleasing image. The bird's pose it gorgeous and very original!

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    Gus Cobos
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    Hi Jeni,
    I like your capture and image, I see that the bird is over sharpened and the eye does not look natural. Try to selective sharpen instead of an over all general sharpening...:cool:

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    i love the compo here!! only wished that all of the flower was included. tone down the hotspots and i think you have a nice keeper!!

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    Lisa Williams
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    Jeni, is this a redo of "Mousebird Challenge"? If so you've done some excellent PP work here. I never would have had the patience. And if it's not I still like it a lot. Will leave the critiquing on this to better minds.

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    Lance Peters
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    Hi Jeni - well done - few points worth correcting as above - but job well done :)

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    Alfred Forns
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    Agree with previous points and the over sharpening seems to be the most damaging !!! Can't wait to see the next one, they are such cool birds !!!

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