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    Default LI Hummer Down in the Thicket

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    Same location as Lou just down 2 or 3 feet.
    Canon 40 D
    300 2.8 2X
    Flash
    1/800 F 9 ISO 400
    Cropped

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    Nice perch and head turn but I think that background is killing it for me.

    How about bluring the hek out of it ? :)

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    Robert O'Toole
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    Hi Ted,

    I like the image overall, the comp, positioning and the head turn are good.

    Negatives for me is a lack of sharpness in the head area, other than the eye. The light is a little harsh. Lastly the BG is a bit of a problem for me also.

    Still like it overall.

    Robert

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    Linda Robbins
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    Good head position and composition on this relaxed cutie. The background is quite busy, but it can be difficult to find hummingbirds perched with a clean bg.
    I would sharpen just the face a bit.

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    Thank you all so much for your suggestions-I will work on these ideas later today.
    Appreciate your help.
    Ted:)

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