I like the alert pose, eye contact and BG. I would put the bird further to the right in the frame, add some space at the bottom and crop some off the top. You could try to tone down the highlights on the perch.
Yes to a big crop from the right and the top. The llight from the right is causing the EXP problems: the lichens on the perch are over-exposed but the shaded side of the bird is on the dark side. ..
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