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    Default Motif: Marbled Godwit

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    Another one from early morning Morro Bay. C&C encouraged and appreciated, Thanks for looking and commenting; so much to learn and all of you and this forum that make that happen!

    Canon 40D; Av f5.6, 1/200; Eval +1 1/3; ISO 800; 100-400 @400mm

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    Gus Cobos
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    Hi Katie,
    I like your composition, the bird is placed just right in frame. The colors are very pleasing and you show sharp details. I would like to see just a tad of CW rotation on the head...well done, Katie...congrats...:cool:

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    This is really lovely, Katie. The only thing I'm wondering about is whether the reflection really adds anything to this image. Might be a stronger high key without it? Lovely definition and DOF on the bird. I want to reach right out and touch those feathers!

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    Hi Katie - nice one - agree with jules, I woullose the reflectionthink it will improve theimage.

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    Alfred Forns
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    Hi Katie Agree with the reflection I think it will be a stronger image cropping half way down the reflection !!! Excellent pose and look Might increase contrast in the bird just a tad !!! Excellent !!!

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    Thanks all for the comments; I was debating about the crop and the reflection so I appreciate the feedback!

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    Hi Katie,
    This is really lovely - yet another vote for losing half the reflection!!
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    Nicki

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    nice one katie!! lots of detail in the bird. agree with the other suggestions about the crop!!

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