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    Shellie Dallas
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    Here is a shot from April with my D300, 300 2.8, 1/60 at 4.0, -2/3 EV, ISO 100 hand held. I have been working with Artie's Digital Eye Doctor instructions.....I may have over done it here though:confused:

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    Hi Shellie,

    What a nice image!! I really like your composition, and the eye looks fine to me. The color and patterns of the water add a lot for me too! - Great job :)

    Bruce

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    Gus Cobos
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    Nicely done Shellie,
    Love the reflection and the nice deep green water. You have a good head angle and great eye contact...:cool:

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    I like the background and the reflection. The eye looks ok to me. However, I'm not comfortable with overall composition though. It seems to me there's a bit too much room on the left. The goose doesn't look like it was in a good pose either. I think I'd have the whole goose in the photo. Just my thoughts.
    Last edited by Desmond Chan; 08-15-2008 at 11:45 PM.

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    Hi Shellie -likewise exposure looks good as does the eye contact and HA, Like the reflection.

    Have to agree with desmond - the overall composition doesn't do anything for me either - but that is only my personal taste - so don't let that bother you. :)

    Looing forward to seeing more:)

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    Hi Shellie,
    If you took some off the top and made it more of a pano it would improve the proportions.
    Regards,
    Nicki

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    Alfred Forns
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    Love it as presented Just gorgeous water and do like the crop Was thinking along the lines of Nicki in making more of a pano Different and works !!!!!

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    Julie Kenward
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    Sah-wheet! Beautifully exposed and great composition. That water is to die for!

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    Nonda Surratt
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    Agree with Julie, water rocks!!! Pano sounds interesting

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    Shellie Dallas
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    How is this???:)

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    Stephen Cunliffe
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    where do I find those digital eye instructions?

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    Shellie Dallas
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    Artie's website.. Its the digital basic file/PDF. I have greatly enjoyed it! http://www.birdsasart.com

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    Oscar Zangroniz
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    Excellent details Shellie. Background, composition and the reflection are also very good so.
    Regards,

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