Fabs I love the colour and the totally black silhouettes here. At first I wasn't too sure if the two OOF birds in the URC, but I find that they do balance the foreground bird (and its shadow).
Hi Fabs,
I love the image as presented but I think that it would work equally well if you cloned out the OOF birds - a study in minimalism...
Beautiful colours!
Regards,
Nicki
Would not want to clone out the two back birds as they balance the COMP perfectly. Hard to tell if the bird with the fish has its head turned away a bit... Love the color and the light and the image.
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The composition works perfectly for me. Agree with Artie on the small bird balancing the compo - hence I too would not prefer it cloned out. Liked this image a lot. One thing that bothers a bit is the reddish vertical strip (perhaps a shadow of a tree or so) running in the middle.