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    Sometimes you have eto take things as they are handed to you and this was on of those occasions.
    Viera Wetlands Click ponds, a couple of month ago.

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    f/4, 1/100, ISO 1000
    Gradient filter applied to BG

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    Fabs I love the colour and the totally black silhouettes here. At first I wasn't too sure if the two OOF birds in the URC, but I find that they do balance the foreground bird (and its shadow).

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    Fabs, Once again you made the "Sweet Lemonade" - If my image I might clone away the little bird since it dose not have much profile. Bob

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    Great light, composition and mood.

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    Hi Fabs, what I like about this is that you can still tell that a fish has been caught by the silhouette, lovely colours also :) Tell

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    love the use of the gradient tool!! awesome colors!! the fish even gave you a good head angle!!

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    Hi Fabs,
    I love the image as presented but I think that it would work equally well if you cloned out the OOF birds - a study in minimalism...
    Beautiful colours!
    Regards,
    Nicki

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    This is so beautiful. My favorite elements are the color and the fish. I like the OOF birds and think they are a good balance for the image.

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    Stunning color and lighting Fab and a very nice balance in this composition. Good eye as always my friend.

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    Hi Fab,

    This works very well for me. Excellent composition.

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    I really like the colors,light and mood!!!

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    Would not want to clone out the two back birds as they balance the COMP perfectly. Hard to tell if the bird with the fish has its head turned away a bit... Love the color and the light and the image.
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    The composition works perfectly for me. Agree with Artie on the small bird balancing the compo - hence I too would not prefer it cloned out. Liked this image a lot. One thing that bothers a bit is the reddish vertical strip (perhaps a shadow of a tree or so) running in the middle.

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    Beautiful image to my eye, Fabs. Is there a bit of flash in the main bird's eye? It looks like there's a catchlight there, which is an added bonus.

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    Greg

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    Real interesting image, Fabs. Love how you saw and executed this. One small thing is there 's a dust spot in the ul corner.

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    Sorry I missed this one Fabs! beautiful and creative., well done.

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