Nice composition Ari! I love the one in bloom against the one that's not...very nice. The whites on the dandelion seem just a tad dark on my computer...you might want to punch the high tones just a bit. Otherwise, I think you really nailed this one!
Sincerely i don't like it (subjectif point of view): there many subject,making to loose attention. It could be cropped maintaining only the upper part. Others comments?
You often hear folk say "keep it simple", well this is an terrific example and I think it is an absolutely fantastic image, I love everything about it, in fact I am going to attempt something similar myself - today!!
Jon