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    I had a chance to practice my multi-flash technique the other day and learned a few more things along the way. I am slowly getting closer to the results I want. Hopefully by the time I get to Ecuador in January I'll have it 100% dialed in :)

    Because I am really trying to work on my multi-flash technique - I would appreciate any feedback that you might have on this one.



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    multi flash is way beyond my capabilities!! but looks like you are getting really dialed in here!! only thing i see that is distracting is the small petal that intersects the head. other than that, it's great!!!

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    It certainly doesn't look overly flashed. On the other hand, one could argue that it looks a little flat, perhaps underflashed. No iridescence to speak of. I'd like to see the breast illuminated a little better Glenn.
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    Sweet little thing. The petal has been mentioned. Very nice wing pose.

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    Love the composition Glenn and as mentioned it does not look over flashed at all. Will look forward to seeing your images come next January !!!

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    I'm not the guy to critique as I'm new to photography, but this looks fantastic to me.

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    I've not yet used multiple flashes, but I love Hummers, and this is a pleasing image. The wing position is great with a good background and nice contrasting color with the flower. If the flower were also as sharp as the bird, I would give it all "10's" I will certainly look forward to seeing your future Hummingingbird shots.

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    Hi, Glenn. You've gotten your backgrounds down for sure. You and I have discussed this at length, and while neither of us is a fan of the overflashed look, I agree with Doug that the lighting could actually use a little kick. I'm not sure about the details of your setup but it might have to do with the positioning of the flashes. Also, in terms of the composition, I would like to see just a bit more separation between bird and flower, that is, not having the beak quite so far down in the flower. Easier said than done, but I know that you're striving for perfection so I hope the comments are helpful.

    Cheers,
    Greg

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