Doug, nice image. I like the raised wings and the fish (needlefish?). Maybe needs a little room up top and to the right. Cant make my mind up about the grass at the bottom.
Dan
Last edited by Dan Walker; 08-07-2008 at 04:46 PM.
Hi Doug! Nice eye contact, wing position, and fish! You definitely need more room up top and on the right. Please include full tech specs when you post; it makes the critique business a little easier for others and more rewarding for you. Thanks for posting!
Agree for more room. Great BG and I love the grass at bottom, but the thicker dark streak touching the fish is a good candidate for elimination :-) The whites on the body near the tail are hot. The bonus fish catch is cool!
Sharp. EXC wing position. I'm fine with the grass but the big, curved o-o-f stick below the front of the bird is very distracting.
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