Looks as if the underwings have been lightened too much; did you lighten them? If yes, how?
And yes as Maxis says, it needs more contrast and blacker blacks.
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I like the pose, catch and BG. Adding to the other comments, I would give it more room at the right, wish for a better head angle and sharpen the bird a bit more.