Hi Rick !!! I love the wing position, great having the fish looking at us and all so sharp. Would like seeing just a little more of the head but that is the luck of the draw Might select the fish and lighten for a little more detail. LIght was slightly form your right but the bird is well illuminated, would lighten the bottom rear wing. I like it a lot !!!
I just wish for more separation between edge of wing and eye. As is they are touching, and there is a black mark from wing to pupil that needs fixing. Otherwise very cool, and I like the far wing stretching forward.
Great wing position and the fish adds to it. It would be nice if the head were a bit more visible but I like the 'sneak peek' perspective nevertheless.