Results 1 to 13 of 13

Thread: Song Sparrow after bath

  1. #1
    Gail Spitler
    Guest

    Default Song Sparrow after bath

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    I am very curious about what you'll think of this image. How does the disclaimer in the movies go ..... no animals were injured in the production of this image. Actually I assure you the bird is fine. It had just had a thorough soaking in a bath, landed on the perch, shook all over and then bent over to rub the side of its head and neck against the perch.
    Basically I did very little to the image - cropped, sharpened and tweaked color and contrast a tad.

    So what say you? Let the HAP have at it:)

    Gail

    Canon 40D, 100-400mm IS 4.5-5.6, f/5.6 at 1/1000sec, EV 0 comp, ISO 640

  2. #2
    Dave Slaughter
    Guest

    Default

    Gail, I think it's a great image, but song sparrows are my favorite birds, so I could be prejudiced. I'd add some canvas to the tight. It's razor sharp. I bet he was fun to watch.

  3. #3
    Dave Slaughter
    Guest

    Default

    Opps, I meant "right".

  4. #4
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Posts
    2,940
    Threads
    288
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Personally, I think it's a behavior shot and so the look of it is secondary. But, it's just another newbee's opinion. Having said that, would it be better if you could shoot it from another angle so that we could see the cheek and the eye? I think so.

    Good colors and details.

  5. #5
    Julie Kenward
    Guest

    Default

    Well, it certainly made me giggle! :D

    You seem to have all the aesthetics down - good DOF (depth of focus), really nice BG (background), good color saturation. If I could just see ONE EYE I'd be jumping up and down for ya! As it is...it leaves me with less of an emotional attachment to the bird whereas, with a good eye looking my way, he would have totally got a belly laugh out of me.

    You were thiiiiiiiis close! :)

  6. #6
    Lance Peters
    Guest

    Default

    Agree with Julie on this one - just missing that eye :) :) :)

  7. #7
    Gail Spitler
    Guest

    Default Missing eyes

    Hey ... on my monitor the bird's left eye (now which one is that?) is visible. :):););):D

    But I agree, the ayes/eyes have it:p

    Gail

  8. #8
    Alfred Forns
    Guest

    Default

    Love it but have to agree I need to see at least one eye !!!!! Amazing how much difference it makes .... makes the image !!!


    What a pose.... even has his mouth open !!! :cool:

  9. #9
    Oscar Zangroniz
    Guest

    Default

    Great moment capture Gail. Your techs are fine, do agree with comments about the eye.

  10. #10
    Gus Cobos
    Guest

    Default

    Hi Gail,
    I need that eye, The composition and bird placement is good. The details are razor sharp and the colors are in check. I also like the capture and action displayed...:cool:

  11. #11
    Nonda Surratt
    Guest

    Default

    Agree with Julie, lots to love and great sharpness,color etc..Need that eye

  12. #12
    Lisa Flory
    Guest

    Default

    I see that eye. Perhaps you can adjust it individually to make it stand out more.

  13. #13
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    Boynton Beach, Florida
    Posts
    7,726
    Threads
    640
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    great detail in the bird and a sweet looking bg. cool pose from the bird, but agree with the rest. would be a killer image with an eye!!!!!!

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics