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    Ivan Miksik
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    South Bohemia (near Trebon), Czech Republic

    Canon EOS 300, Mir 20/3.5
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    Paul Marcellini
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    I think this composition works but I wish for a stronger foreground. I really want to see more detail of the lakes edge. The transitions of color there look like they could work really well. It looks like an interesting place. Thanks for posting.

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    Agree with Paul about blank foreground. I think the atmosphere is all-round flat and could do with something better to liven and saturate things up.

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