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    Default What Are You Looking At!!!!!!!!!?

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    Same Kite as yesterday. different pose taken vertical instead of landscape at 8:27am. i dont think the light was too harsh here? the only hotspot that showed up was the catchlight in his eye. added some density to the bird and blackened the iris of the eye a little. desaturated the reds and the greens.

    D300, Bigma at 500mm, f/6.3, 1/800s, -0.3EV, ISO 500, ff w/bb at +2.3EV

    comments and critiques are appreciated!! thanks!!

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    I think it's a nice image. As for if the light is harsh, perhaps it is judging by the feet. I guess if the light were softer, more details would show. The size of this image could also make those details not that visible though. A couple of branches in the foreground are now touching the frame. I always have the impression that it may not be a good thing composition-wise. Hopefully some would shed some light on it.

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    Mr. H. I like this one much better. Doesn't seem as bright, still excellent background and placement.
    Will miss you tomorrow.

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    Alberto Oria
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    Harold, I agree with Oscar, much better light control on this one. I like this snail kites, one of this days we should up there and visit your kites

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    Nonda Surratt
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    Lucky you Mr H. Looks like you handled the light well,cool birdie. Like Desmond not real sure about the branches running out of the frame?

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    Hi Mr H - like much better than the previous - like the open beak pose.

    Id also clean up the perch :)

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    Hi Harold: Lovely Bird, timing super to get photo with mouth open . . . first Kite I've seen (That is without a string attached) . . . Uncle Gus :D

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    Julie Kenward
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    Gus, it looks like what you have there is a color cast. You can go into levels and click on the gray eyedropper, then click on a spot that is supposed to be middle gray and that should pull your color cast down into the cooler tones and leave you with some more natural looking light on the bird and branches. I'd also think about toning down that top wing - it's just a bit too bright.

    As for the branches on the right side, I don't mind the two that are going OUT of the frame but the one coming IN needs to go for sure!

    Love the expression on your kite's face! Good catch!

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