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    Default Oriental Magpie Robin

    Taken in Fraser's Hill in between birdwaves and thick mist.
    This shot was "recovered" using Apple Aperture, resized with CS2

    1D MkIII + EF600mm + 1.4II ext
    1/80s f/5.6 EV -1/3 iso640 Evaluative metering Fill flash -2


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    I like the angle and details. I wish for a bit more head turn toward you and would remove the orange spot on the right side and the white one above the tail. Keep them coming!

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    Beautiful species! I agree with Axel about the cleanup, in fact, I think trimming from the right side would improve the composition as I don't see what purpose all that space on the right has. Looking forward to more of your images!

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    Quite sharp and stunning. Great detail in the darks. Yes to the clean-up suggestions, esp. the white blob.
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    Beautiful image with lovely detail and excellent exposure. I agree about the clean-up suggested above. Like this alot Phil and many thanks for sharing !!

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    Thanks all for your comments and suggestions,
    here is the re-worked picture and hope it's good.


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