Nicely framed but could use a smidge more room below and could be a bit brighter. An option with this pose is to place the bird on the right side of the frame. The face could use some selective sharpening.
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In addition to the comments above is that I'd wish for a bit better head angle: either towards us to see the other eye a bit more, or the other way to give more of a profile and better define the bill from the body.