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    Default Brown hare (Lepus europaeus)

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    Brown hare image captured on an early morning walk around the immediate environs. The hare was in shade , I also have some where he is in the light.

    Hand held from a squatting position.

    Model Name : OM-1 OLYMPUS M.150-400mm F4.5
    ISO : 1600
    Exposure compensation : 0.0 EV
    Exposure mode : Manual exposure
    Shutter : 1/800 sec
    F.No. : F5.6

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    Nice colour profile here, Jonathan. I also like the soft light (due to being in the shade), which enhanced the details on the hare. I also like that the hare is "framed" by grass on either side. In a perfect world more head-turn in your direction would have been nice.
    Might look at brightening it overall just a tad, and desaturating greens ever so slightly.
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    It's the grass framing that takes this above the norm here Jonathan, nicely positioned, the abundance of greenery really hits you and makes for quite a dramatic scene, well done.

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    Hi Jon, I quite like it, but for me:

    It's too dark, irrespective of being in the shade, you can still lift it, whilst retaining in shadow look
    It's too tight at the foot, a sliver more, I just feel the subject is slipping out of frame, more below a tad less above
    Greens are just pushed a fraction, ie +4 Magenta just helps IMHO
    Sadly the subject is angled away.

    Just my take.

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    Thanks for the feedback everyone, much appreciated. Steve, I cropped a little off the base because it was messy with dead tatty looking branches/twigs.

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    Hi Jon i am a bit undecided about this posting ... matter of taste .
    I do like the overall concept ... but would go brighter in the dark/mid tones .
    Funny enough you are " complaining " many times about my grass color .... well this is quite close or similar , how come ??
    The hare himself does look quite nice albeit he is angled away , but it does like he is checking the viewer


    TFS Andreas

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    Quote Originally Posted by Andreas Liedmann View Post
    Hi Jon i am a bit undecided about this posting ... matter of taste .
    I do like the overall concept ... but would go brighter in the dark/mid tones .
    Funny enough you are " complaining " many times about my grass color .... well this is quite close or similar , how come ??
    The hare himself does look quite nice albeit he is angled away , but it does like he is checking the viewer




    TFS Andreas
    Andreas, I admit the grass colour concerned me a little, I do feel it is a little too intense but I felt I was recreating the scene.

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    LOL Jon .... actually I do NOT find the greens too intense , just too dark .

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