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    sakin ve keyifli bir an

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    The whiteness on the bird front in the first image has been removed.

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    Pleasant image but I feel the bird is slightly too far to the left and rather small in the frame.

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    I do like the concept .... but the bird is placed on the " wrong side " of the frame , at least IMHO. But tastes do vary ....

    TFS Andreas

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    Interesting Comments Volkan, that is the first thing I noticed is how far the bird is to the left. But then I thought it was a nice touch to show the trailing ripples. So I am fine with that aspect of the image. I find the background colors just superb and very calming. I would maybe move the duck higher in the image. TFS

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    Hi guys, thanks Jon.
    Andreas, sure, but Kevin's opinion outweighs.


    I thought like a wave created by a bird, the distance traveled is too much. Age 42 bought the return ticket, I don't know if I will live as long as Arthur :)

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    I find it rather artistic, and like it. Very dreamy. I prefer the second version with the yellow blob removed, but now the blue extends too low in that spot.

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    RP for me.....The length of the trailing ripples adds to the dreamy feel....Nice one

    Will

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    I like the idea of a "wake" shot. A pano crop might work well. I also like the soft light and the dreamy colors.

    with love, a

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    Thanks, every criticism is taken into account.

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