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stork two

hi,
Valuable criticisms are taken into account. Thank you.
A1-200-600
f6.3 1/3200 iso1250
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Focus and exposure look good, depth of field good. I don't think there's much to to do to improve the image, possibly a minor brightening around the eye.
If it was the archetypal "good" image the wings would perhaps be a little lower and the angle of the bird coming slightly toward the camera. Its a pretty good image and I personally would not be unhappy with it - why not appreciate it for what it is rather than wish it was something else? - Just a thought.
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hi jon,
I got the message ;)
You are right, but it is a pleasure to seek and strive for better. Opinion. Thank you for your beautiful and meaningful suggestion.
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Hi Volkan....I like the flight pose and good detail on the bird...The greens along the bottom add so much to the frame....I would brighten the whole image up a little, see if it makes a difference.
Will
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Details on the back look good, but the head doesn't look as sharp. I assume the focus point fell on the wing? I agree the frame could be brightened a bit. Wing position isn't ideal; it would be nice to see more of the neck.
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If I give light, there may be an explosion in the head part. the sharpness is easy without disturbing the naturalness.
thanks.
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Hi Volkan ... can only echo Dorian's thoughts here .
Too dark , head not sharp and the blue of the sky is on the magenta side .
Check the histogram .... then you see how much room there is on the RHS .... the head will not explode
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You need to get your grips into the editing process , regardless of the camera manufacturer
TFS Andreas
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hi Andreas,
I would appreciate it if you could provide an example image. pertaining to sharpness and background

or is that what you mean
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Hi Volkan, nice work getting this in the first place! I do have to agree with Andreas and Dorian on their points. I think the repost Andreas did is a major improvement. Still nicely done!
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Teşekkürler Andreas, güzel. bana daha iyi göründü.
Burada olanları takdir ediyorum. Umarım değeri herkes tarafından bilinir. Doğru ve güzel olana ulaşmada bu sitenin ve üyelerinin katkısı büyük.
teşekkürler kurt
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Hmm :) Steve Kaluski should have been here too ..
Last edited by Volkan Akgul; 04-12-2023 at 11:23 AM.