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    Lisa Williams
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    Same hawk as the one posted a couple of days ago. This is at the beginning of his flight away from the Northern Mockingbird. Post processing: cropped, S/H of 25/55/45, slight sharpening, and Neat Image.
    I kept the Agave plant in the bottom right to balance the image.
    Canon 1D Mark III
    1/3200Sec.
    F8.0
    Partial metering
    0 EV
    ISO 400
    Lens EF100-400mm f/4.5-5.6L IS USM +1.4x
    Focal Length 560.0 mm
    sRAW
    White Balance Daylight
    AI Servo AF

    C & C appreciated.
    Lisa

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    Hi Lisa, wow - that's some look....
    Great image - for me, I think that the agave makes the perspective a little odd - but that could be just me...
    I love the background colour and the hawk looks nice and sharp on my monitor. Love the clenched feet too!!

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    hi lisa!! you sure captured a moment here!! only wished there were some separation between the two birds. i took your picture and lightened the cheekbones on the falcon. hope you dont mind!! nice job.

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    Hi Lisa!

    Very powerful image, and a nice sharp in-your-face under very hard/harsh light. I agree with some separation, and very nice that both birds have the down wing position, you also have a nice little diagonal going on there! Have you ever tried any of the eye enhancements? It may bring out the pupils, and an even better eye contact.

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    Awesome shot! I've nothing to suggest - it's incredible that you were even able to get such an image.

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    As mentioned, wish there were more separation from the mocking bird. Perhaps you could consider blurring the background more? Nice capture !!

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    Gus Cobos
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    Great capture Lisa,
    I always love a good chase...:eek: love the eye contact and the expression on the bird...:cool:

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    Lance Peters
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    All covered for me lisa - the seperation is the main issue. Well done.

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    Oscar Zangroniz
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    Great capture Lisa, excellent head angle. Only nit is the second bird.
    Congrats

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    Lisa, this is an awesome image and the great suggestions by the gang will make it even better.

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    Lisa Williams
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    Thanks all for the comments. I think your suggestions are very valid. I've just spent two hours repeatedly goofing this up while trying to incorporate the changes. I've tried extracting the hawk and putting him on a second image with the same background, I've tried different ways to mask the Mockingbird and the agave, all to no avail - all I manage to do is make a mess. I'm just not that good with photoshop.
    I do appreciate the comments and suggestions.
    Harold, I had lightened the eyes prior to posting, just not as much as you did. Your's are better.

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