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    Default One more of the Cormoran!

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    Yeap, one more of the Cormorant, now, a wider shot, where the whole wing can be apreciated, I specially like the head position, and the "I'm sexy" look on his face :) Hope you like it, c&c are very welcome!!!

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    The detail on the wing is gorgeous.

    I'm not so sure about the composition, it seems a touch akward. Perhaps a bit more off the right side?

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    Composition works pretty well for me. Love the details and dat bluish BG sets off the bird nicely.

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    Hi Ramón!
    I really enjoy seeing the details of the wing, it looks like a painting to me! I also agree about the -sexy- look of its face.

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    I would prefer a bit more head turn,otherwise great pose and wing position!

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    I like your comp. the bg really compliments the Comorant nicely beautiful colors and detail.....

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    Very sharp with a perfect EXP. I am fine with the COMP. Manos gets the critiquing prize for mentioning the poor head angle which in this case resulted in the face being lit less than ideally.
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    Thank ypu all for your commets, I'll go back to the beach and try to get it right with a better head turn and with a better light too. Have a great day you all!!

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    Nice shot! Like the colors and the comp. Agree about the head angle.

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    Nice Shot Ramon. Very good details at the wing. Good Luck when you go back to the beach to get a better head's angle

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