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    hi,
    R6-400mm f4 DOII
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    Hi Volkan. I like the bird, but I feel that there is too much empty space around it. Also I would like to have seen the rest of the body and legs. It almost looks like you have masked out the body/legs area in post processing.

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    Hi Volkan, agree with Paul, it's just a wee bit lost in the overall mush, it also doesn't appear that sharp.

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    Volkan, I too have quite a number or pied wagtails and quite similar...... unfortunately I have to agree it doesn't quite work. if the bird's wings were up and it was about to take off that would be a different matter.

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    hi Paul, Steve and Jon.

    It's different, I wanted to share. Thank you for your valuable comments :)

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    Yeah, I love the blur but think we need to see more of the bird to make it work. There seems to be a blurred bit running across the bird's chest (breast band). That's a bit distracting. Also, the eye looks washed out. Did you lighten it?

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    hi Dorian, yes :)

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