Hi Dorian, you have has some superb encounters, very cool.
Again, dependant on what you see on screen and if you add Vibrance too. If you are leaving it in Lr with profile set to Adobe colour it's just pants, looks good, but Adobe puts its spin on the file and technically screws it with Contrast & Saturation.
Overall I would like to seen more Tonal depth, more guts in that colour so you have more form & substance to the image, creating depth, changing a 2D into a 3D image. Secondly you missed a trick with the weather, you needed a much slower SS to emphasis the rain to again, give the image atmosphere, it's all lost, nothing much in PP, only in the camera techs. Finally it needs a sliver more below , it's too tight at the foot, otherwise fine IMHO.
TFS
Steve