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Macro and Flora Moderator
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Super dynamic image, Jonathan. Under other circumstances, I like to see the head separated from the body a bit, but I love how the curve from the breast to the crown of the head is perfectly aligned and meets square in the center of the back. Shooting angle is a bit steep, but that hardly matters with the pose and the way that yellow eye sucks us right in. Looks great in high key. Much prefer this to plain blue sky. Fanned tail is also nice.
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Wildlife Moderator
Hi Jon, I like the curvature of the head, kind of compliments the curve of the wings. Would like more room all round so the subject can breathe, just too tight for me.
I doctored the tail, it intersected the bird's left wing.
You need to soften the edge, it's too sharp.
TFS
Steve
Post Production: It’s ALL about what you do with the tools and not, which brand of tool you use.
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BPN Member
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Macro and Flora Moderator
I agree the tail doctoring was less than ideal, I have to admit I didn't take enough time.
Steve I'll take another looks at the crop, the colour spectrum Andreas, I deliberately oversaturated the oranges, the light was flat and colours in the raw were rather washed out but I don't know what it is that you are referring to.
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BPN Member
Jon it is again the blue /cyan spectrum in the plumage ... that is jumping into my eyes .
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Macro and Flora Moderator
Originally Posted by
Andreas Liedmann
Jon it is again the blue /cyan spectrum in the plumage ... that is jumping into my eyes .
Thanks Andreas, I'll see what I can do!
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Macro and Flora Moderator