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    Hello there,


    Your valuable comments and suggestions are appreciated.
    Canon 1D MKIII - Canon 400mm
    1/3000 - f5.6 iso500

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    Very pleasing image, good timing, the head doesn't look perfect maybe a little more sharpening would help, was the image cropped?

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    Great wing position and love the fish...especially in flight! The image overall seems a tad bit underexposed on my monitor.

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    Nice overall. Good pose, prey, composition. I agree it looks a touch dark though, and the thin bright strip above does distract, at least for me. You could clone at around 20% some colour directly above or below, and repeat to taste. Good job overall!

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    Nice to see the fish in the bill espcially while in flight. Yes, brighten it up some.

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    Volkan, nice to see you posting!!

    Great action here, love the food in mouth. Very nice wing position.

    Agreed on exposure, feels quite dark. Perhaps a couple tweaks and this would be a real winner!

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    thanks friends.

    taken into account. all valuable.

    :)

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    Thank you Jon,

    in my opinion, the light conditions forced the equipment (I do not know)
    full frame, no crop.

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    HI Volkan ... action , pose , trailing water and the caught fish are very nice .
    Personally I would go lighter overall and drop the blacks fro more detail in the leg and the beak .
    Agree with the others about the softer head area .

    TFS Andreas

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    hi Andreas,

    good to see you. If you process this photo, it will be a master work.


    thanks

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