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Macro and Flora Moderator
Well caught, the long focal length has caused compression making it look as though the bird didn't have a neck! Nothing you could do about that apart from bearing that fact in mind for the future.
I may consider adding a little pop this may give a little more depth as it were and give a greater impression of depth.
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Thank you for your feedback. What would be the best way to "add a little pop"? What I mean is what settings should I tweak?
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Funny I had the same though as Jonathan. The bird looks like it doesn't have a neck. Looks nice high key. Also like the curled up wing tips.
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Avian Moderator
Muhammad, very nice high key flight shot. The tones and colors work nicely from my view.
Love the down the barrel stare and glad to see some of the underside of the flight feathers.
I could see one with subject a bit more left in frame. TFS!
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Originally Posted by
John Mack
Funny I had the same though as Jonathan. The bird looks like it doesn't have a neck. Looks nice high key. Also like the curled up wing tips.
Thanks, John. Nice to see another fellow Ithacan on BPN :)
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The spread wings are very dramatic! I agree it's odd to see this bird without a neck, but that fact that you got both yellow eyes in focus makes this image work. I also like the feet peaking out from the undercarriage. I would move the bird left in the frame as there's a lot of empty space there. The bird feels to be coming around to the viewer's right, so I think that should be the long side of the horizontal axis.
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Originally Posted by
Dorian Anderson
The spread wings are very dramatic! I agree it's odd to see this bird without a neck, but that fact that you got both yellow eyes in focus makes this image work. I also like the feet peaking out from the undercarriage. I would move the bird left in the frame as there's a lot of empty space there. The bird feels to be coming around to the viewer's right, so I think that should be the long side of the horizontal axis.
Thank you for your comments. Those are very helpful. I did move the bird to the left after Brian's suggestion. Are you thinking I should move it more to the left? More upper left or lower left?
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Sorry, I missed the repost! It looks much better.
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Wow, this is very cool!! I'd be so happy with this. The repost addresses the one concern I had nicely. Good call levelling the eyes. Was there snow on the ground? The underwings have that light bouncing back up off the snow effect - which I like.
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