I captured this head shot of a Green Heron last Friday at Lake Morton in Lakeland, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.
Nikon D500
Nikon 500mm F/5.6 VR AF-S ED PF + Nikon 1.4 III Teleconverter, camera and lens supported by a Oben carbon fiber monopod with a Wimberly MonoGimbal head
1/2000 F8 Matrix Metering EV 0 ISO 2200 Auto 1 WB, image captured at 700mm (1050mm 35mm Equivalent)
Post processed in Lightroom Classic, Photoshop CC 2021 and Topaz Denoise AI
Cropped for composition and presentation
Last edited by Joseph Przybyla; 08-16-2021 at 01:02 PM.
Joe Przybyla
"Sometimes I do get to places just as God is ready to have somebody click the shutter"... Ansel Adams
Nice Greenie Joe. When I see larger, fishing bird portraits I'll likely always think of you.
Lots of detail shown in the plumage and great look at the eye. Composition works pretty well though I wouldn't be mad at a touch more left.
I am a huge fan of retaining some texture in the feathers and face/beak, as you probably know, versus a completely Topaz'd out look. At first glance, it felt like maybe you could have selectively applied a bit more NR, however I'm not sure how much grit is in the raw.
Little bit of posterization in the bkg it seems. There are also some spots with a bit of a halo, i.e. below the beak and in the plume feathers sticking up going back over the head. Might be worth a second look.
Lighting, exposure, and detail look very good, Joe! I woulda dropped the ISO and used a slower shutter since the bird was still. That would have yielded slight crisper feather detail. I love the proportioning, but I could see a bit more room at left.
Nice Greenie Joe. When I see larger, fishing bird portraits I'll likely always think of you.
Lots of detail shown in the plumage and great look at the eye. Composition works pretty well though I wouldn't be mad at a touch more left.
I am a huge fan of retaining some texture in the feathers and face/beak, as you probably know, versus a completely Topaz'd out look. At first glance, it felt like maybe you could have selectively applied a bit more NR, however I'm not sure how much grit is in the raw.
Little bit of posterization in the bkg it seems. There are also some spots with a bit of a halo, i.e. below the beak and in the plume feathers sticking up going back over the head. Might be worth a second look.
Overall, well shown!
Hi Brian, thank you for viewing and commenting. I will revisit the image with your suggestions and comments in mind to see if I can make it better. Thanks again...
Joe Przybyla
"Sometimes I do get to places just as God is ready to have somebody click the shutter"... Ansel Adams
Lighting, exposure, and detail look very good, Joe! I woulda dropped the ISO and used a slower shutter since the bird was still. That would have yielded slight crisper feather detail. I love the proportioning, but I could see a bit more room at left.
Hi Dorian, thank you for viewing and commenting. Most times I would have lowered the shutter speed but in this case the birds head was moving, right, left, up and down, constantly scanning the lake and sky. So I had to catch the image on the go anticipating where the head would be, hoping for a good head angle. Thanks again...
Joe Przybyla
"Sometimes I do get to places just as God is ready to have somebody click the shutter"... Ansel Adams
Looks quite nice to me. Head angle and framing perfect. along with everything else.
with love, artie
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