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    I captured this head shot of a Green Heron last Friday at Lake Morton in Lakeland, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    Joe:

    Very nice detail retained despite the ISO, good colors, the blue sky complimenting the orange feathers.

    I really enjoyed Lake Morton the few times I was there, hope to return when Covid settles down again.

    Thanks for sharing.

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    Nice Greenie Joe. When I see larger, fishing bird portraits I'll likely always think of you.

    Lots of detail shown in the plumage and great look at the eye. Composition works pretty well though I wouldn't be mad at a touch more left.

    I am a huge fan of retaining some texture in the feathers and face/beak, as you probably know, versus a completely Topaz'd out look. At first glance, it felt like maybe you could have selectively applied a bit more NR, however I'm not sure how much grit is in the raw.

    Little bit of posterization in the bkg it seems. There are also some spots with a bit of a halo, i.e. below the beak and in the plume feathers sticking up going back over the head. Might be worth a second look.

    Overall, well shown!

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    Lighting, exposure, and detail look very good, Joe! I woulda dropped the ISO and used a slower shutter since the bird was still. That would have yielded slight crisper feather detail. I love the proportioning, but I could see a bit more room at left.

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    All has been said. I'll just add I love that forehead feather and the framing overall. TFS

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    Quote Originally Posted by Brian Sump View Post
    Nice Greenie Joe. When I see larger, fishing bird portraits I'll likely always think of you.

    Lots of detail shown in the plumage and great look at the eye. Composition works pretty well though I wouldn't be mad at a touch more left.

    I am a huge fan of retaining some texture in the feathers and face/beak, as you probably know, versus a completely Topaz'd out look. At first glance, it felt like maybe you could have selectively applied a bit more NR, however I'm not sure how much grit is in the raw.

    Little bit of posterization in the bkg it seems. There are also some spots with a bit of a halo, i.e. below the beak and in the plume feathers sticking up going back over the head. Might be worth a second look.

    Overall, well shown!
    Hi Brian, thank you for viewing and commenting. I will revisit the image with your suggestions and comments in mind to see if I can make it better. Thanks again...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dorian Anderson View Post
    Lighting, exposure, and detail look very good, Joe! I woulda dropped the ISO and used a slower shutter since the bird was still. That would have yielded slight crisper feather detail. I love the proportioning, but I could see a bit more room at left.
    Hi Dorian, thank you for viewing and commenting. Most times I would have lowered the shutter speed but in this case the birds head was moving, right, left, up and down, constantly scanning the lake and sky. So I had to catch the image on the go anticipating where the head would be, hoping for a good head angle. Thanks again...
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    Looks quite nice to me. Head angle and framing perfect. along with everything else.

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