I captured this image of a Semipalmated Plover at Ft. Desoto in Pinellas County, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.
Nikon D500
Nikon 80-400mm F/5-4.5-5.6 VRII AF-S ED, camera and lens supported by a monopod
1/3200 F/5.6 Matrix Metering EV 0 ISO 250 Auto 1 WB, image captured at 280mm (420mm 35mm Equivalent)
Post processed in Lightroom Classic, Photoshop CC 2021 and Topaz Sharpen AI
Cropped for composition and presentation
Joe Przybyla
"Sometimes I do get to places just as God is ready to have somebody click the shutter"... Ansel Adams
Joe, very creative and I salute that in the highest my friend.
Beautiful canvas with the beautiful, smooth transitions across. So lovely.
Subject looks good, but I see a slight halo above the beak... perhaps from masking?
Only other suggestion would be to keep everything from the top down in its current location, but go to a more traditional 2x3 and cut the bottom section, reducing that final light blue strip a bit.
Hi Joe .... very nice concept shot .
I do like the very " off central " placement of the subject .
In terms of color and contrast I think it is a tiny bit too strong ... way to strong to be honest , IMHO.
The halo that Brian is referring to ... is not masking related IMO . The halo is all round the bird .. albeit being narrower in some other parts .
Cool shot ... which I personally would just edit with more finesse , rather than hammering it with color and contrast , just my 2 cents .
Thanks everyone for viewing and commenting, much appreciated. Here is a edit, I removed the halo around the bill and eliminated the contrast I had added. I think it addresses the suggestions made by Brian and Andreas. Thanks again...
Joe Przybyla
"Sometimes I do get to places just as God is ready to have somebody click the shutter"... Ansel Adams
Good being right on sun angle. I like this one a lot better than the Sanderling. Love the image design and the strips of blue and brown. It needs a bit more off the bottom to get to Sump Scores' suggested crop. The BLUEs look a bit too electric to me.
with love, artie
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Good being right on sun angle. I like this one a lot better than the Sanderling. Love the image design and the strips of blue and brown. It needs a bit more off the bottom to get to Sump Scores' suggested crop. The BLUEs look a bit too electric to me.
with love, artie
Of course I am right on the light angle, some guy name Artie Morris taught me that. The blues became more saturated when posted, not sure why. I will check out Sump Score's crop. Thank you for commenting, Artie.
Joe Przybyla
"Sometimes I do get to places just as God is ready to have somebody click the shutter"... Ansel Adams