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    Default Spotted Flycatcher

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    merhaba,
    canon 1d mk3 - canon800mm f5.6
    1/500 f5.6 iso250

    teşekkürler.

    type of bird ' Oenathe oenanthe ' thanks Jonhattan Ashton.
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    Pretty much perfect, my friend. The processing makes me envious... TFS

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    Nicely shown, clear detail. Composition perhaps a little central making the image a record shot but nevertheless a pleasing image.
    I was a little surprised about the title, my guess female Wheatear (Oenathe oenanthe)??

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    nice frame Volkan, I think it needs a bit more sharpening I wish the feet and part of the breast were not blocked by the perch. nice BG

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    David, değerli geri bildiriminiz için teşekkür ederim.

    Jon, you said right. :) teşekkür ederim.


    Arash, keskinleştirdiğimde pikselleşiyor ve minimumda tutmaya çalışıyorum. Gelişmeye devam edeceğim. değer kattın teşekkür ederim.

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    Very pretty and dainty.
    I can see some cloning marks on the lowest right branch and it looks like you trimmed the branch that intersected with the rump of the bird.
    I would clean those areas up and properly clone out the small remaining bit of stick at edge of bird.
    I would sharpen the face a bit more.
    I like the HA, clean BG and perch.
    Gail

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    Very nice Volkan....Good detail and pose....yes a better perch would be more pleasing

    Will

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    Quote Originally Posted by gail bisson View Post
    Very pretty and dainty.
    I can see some cloning marks on the lowest right branch and it looks like you trimmed the branch that intersected with the rump of the bird.
    I would clean those areas up and properly clone out the small remaining bit of stick at edge of bird.
    I would sharpen the face a bit more.
    I like the HA, clean BG and perch.
    Gail
    Thanks Gail,
    i will pay attention :)

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    Volkan, this is a very pretty frame from you.

    Beautiful, even light and a creamy and smooth background compliment nicely.

    Comments about the cloning noted. I felt like you might be able to add some selective sharpening on the head and eye.

    TFS friend!

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    thanks friends :)

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    The background is great. I do like the pose. I could see this cropped in tighter.

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