Not my usual style but the situation made it impossible to resist an attempt at a backlit frame as the sun was setting, the mosquitoes danced above the water surface and the Phalarope snapped away in circles. Got some nice traditional portraits but I thought I would share this instead as I'm more interested to hear people’s thoughts about if it works. Would you go even darker to highlight the contour of the bird or would you go brighter for a more natural look? As is, this is close to the original file.
Canon EOS 7D Mark II | Canon 500mm f/4.0L IS USM II | ISO 640 | 1/2000s | f/5.6
Last edited by Ivan Sjogren; 12-11-2020 at 12:01 PM.
Unique and lovely Ivan, well done! The specular hihjlights add to your image, I would clean up the lil blob inside the ULS highlight. As noted, the water drop is the icing.
Sweet rim lit frame, particularly with the specular highlights. I would go not darker because there is just enough suggestion of plumage pattern to identify the bird (though the shape/outline alone is enough). I wouldn't go lighter either
as I think that would lessen the drama. We'll see what others say!
Pushing artistic boundaries is awesome and between the light details on the subject, the large specular highlights and the water on the beak this sets my ship asail....
Very pleasing as presented, I like it! The only suggestion I would offer is to lower the brightness on the two highlights immediately to the right of the bird's head - so they are similar to the others- - why? - I think it draws my eye slightly from the subject
Very artistic. I would clone out the ?mosquito or bug in the specular highlight on the upper left and would go a bit darker on the bird but I think that is a matter of personal taste.
What elevates this image is the starburst drop on the tip of the bill. Very nice to see something a bit different!
Gail
Beautiful in its artistry and execution. A version with a touch more warmth could work as well, but nicely seen opportunity and you went for it - and quite successfully too. My favorite part is what Gail mentions: the starburst at the bill tip.
Stunning as presented. The specular highlights are pretty much perfectly positioned. Usually one or two intersect the subject and ruin the image.
with love, artie
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