-
-
I find this very pleasing David.
Nice composition and small-in-frame shot. I like the soft light and the color scheme. I would tone town the magneta just a tad.
I think the perch works but I wish the bird was sitting on the thicker part instead of having that part intersecting the body. Otherwise I think this holds up well in details and IQ too.
-
-
-

Originally Posted by
Ivan Sjogren
Hi again David, I feel like I led you down the wrong path by describing the issue so poorly. Sorry for that. The repost has an even heavier color cast, but green this time. I had a go myself and the changes are very subtle. I wanted to warm the image as a whole, then I added some points of black and contrast. I reduced the saturation of magenta by -20 and then dragged the hue towards the red. I handled the magenta i selective color as well by reducing the cyan in the magenta channel.
Thanks Ivan, once again...
-
I like it. It works well with the big perch and the small bird. Gives a nice sense of scale. The background is pretty nice.
-
Avian Moderator
David,
This is a very interesting composition. I honestly can't tell if I like the small v large here or if the leaves and main limb drown out the subject too much. But there's lots of beauty in it for sure.
I am curious where your focus point shows? Maybe it's me but the rump appears a good bit sharper than the head?
Ivan's color correction looks nice from my view.
Looks like you're having lots of fun with the R6 :-)
-

Originally Posted by
Brian Sump
David,
This is a very interesting composition. I honestly can't tell if I like the small v large here or if the leaves and main limb drown out the subject too much. But there's lots of beauty in it for sure.
I am curious where your focus point shows? Maybe it's me but the rump appears a good bit sharper than the head?
Ivan's color correction looks nice from my view.
Looks like you're having lots of fun with the R6 :-)
Hi Brian, Went back to raw and the eye is right in the center of focus box. At this distance and f7.1 the entire bird would be sharp regardless. It's more my personal preference to not sharpen as much as some like it here. Especially on warblers with those fine feathers. I pointed right at subject, got the eye then recomposed. This is cropped from all sides for better composition and to make subject slightly larger. Yes, they will have to pry both the lens and the body from my cold dead hands... Still learning many nuances.
Last edited by David Roach; 12-12-2020 at 07:45 PM.
-
Macro and Flora Moderator
Good idea David, it has a pleasing composition, colours covered, the only other suggestion I would offer is to reduce the brightness of the background a little and or apply a gentle vignette - this makes the bird and the branch stand out.
-
Post a Thank You. - 1 Thanks
-
Publisher
I like all three versions. It would be a lot of work but if it were mine I would eliminate the three small vertical branches on the right and then lost the grayish shapes as well.
with love, arite
BIRDS AS ART Blog: great info and lessons, lots of images with our legendary BAA educational Captions; we will not sell you junk. 30+ years of long lens experience/e-mail with gear questions.
BIRDS AS ART Online Store: we will not sell you junk. 35 years of long lens experience. Please e-mail with gear questions.
Check out the new SONY e-Guide and videos that I did with Patrick Sparkman here. Ten percent discount for BPN members,
E-mail me at samandmayasgrandpa@att.net.
-
Post a Thank You. - 1 Thanks