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    I captured this image of a Royal Tern at Ft Desoto north beach in Pinellas County, Florida. Terns that are feeding have a couple behaviours that are predictable most times. If they catch a fish they fly up and will flip the fish to position the head for swallowing, if they miss catching a fish they will shake and shimmy to shed water from their feathers. This tern missed and is shaking to shed water from it's feathers. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    Love the water action, nice and sharp. Minor nit, forehead a little hot (or no details). Cool canvas overall. TFS

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    Wonderfully captured behavior shot. Beautiful light, background and composition too with all those droplets to the left.
    The forehead does indeed look hot but for me the overall problem is the lack of details and crunchy look. I can see clusters of pixels. I suspect an issue with Neat Image or something to do with your noise reduction. Maybe the original file wasn't sharp enough either.

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    Quote Originally Posted by David Roach View Post
    Love the water action, nice and sharp. Minor nit, forehead a little hot (or no details). Cool canvas overall. TFS
    Hi David, thank you for viewing and commenting. I know originally the forehead was not hot/clipped because I always check the bright areas and then use the Adjustment Brush in Lightroom to burn those area and adjust the white to between 92 to 94 percent. That being said I did raise the contrast after converting to a TIFF which might have raised the values of the white in those areas.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ivan Sjogren View Post
    Wonderfully captured behavior shot. Beautiful light, background and composition too with all those droplets to the left.
    The forehead does indeed look hot but for me the overall problem is the lack of details and crunchy look. I can see clusters of pixels. I suspect an issue with Neat Image or something to do with your noise reduction. Maybe the original file wasn't sharp enough either.

    Hi Ivan, thank you for viewing and commenting. After reading your comments I pretty much knew what caused what your were seeing and commenting about. I had used the Dehaze slider in Lightroom which raises the contrast and I know at times too much contrast can kill detail. Here is a edit and repost correcting that, hopefully it is better. Thanks again...
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    cool pose, I think there might be more details in the whets to extract where it looks a bit flat

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    I like the pose and all those water drops. The bird does look pretty wet. Most of the shake offs i see the bird has already shook most of the water off.

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