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Avian Moderator
David:
The framing and angle really plays out the scale of the bill. Nicely exposed . Background with just enough detail to provide a sense of depth. I might try a version with a bit more room on the left.
Cheers
Randy
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I would clone out two twigs right next to the bill. Rest looks fine to me.
TFS
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Super Moderator
nice head shot, a slight turn towards us would have been ideal. I'd sharpen it a bit more
TFS
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Lifetime Member
A good solid portrait.
Agree with Randy re: more room on left,
Gail
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Hi David, good portrait, nice pure background. The colors look good, maybe a tad more sharpening as Ari suggested. Watch the white cheek on these birds, I think there is more detail available if not clipped in the RAW file. Thank you for sharing.
Joe Przybyla
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