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    This image was created in Ithaca, New York on 5/22/20 at 6:34PM. Image processed in Lightroom and Photoshop.

    Hand held, Small crop.

    Canon 5D MarkIV
    Canon 500 f/4 IS USM
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    Nice, sweet Bambi John. I quite like the framing, albeit I feel a tad more below would help. Not a lover of f/4 here, eyes ears look ok, but the muzzle falls short and pegging back the SS you could have gained a bit more DoF. Colour looks good, was the grass that vibrant, but the buttercups/flowers need to go, more so the one above the head.

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    Love the framing and the overall view of this cutie. The DOF gets enough for me. The OOF FG vegetation is slightly distracting but I'd be over the moon to be this close and frame it so well before opportunity was gone. So, a very minor nit, indeed. TFS

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    This is absolutely super sweet, what an appealing image, I would love something like this in my collection. Normally I would say ignore the buttercups but because there are two and really in a visually distracting position I agree they need to go. Maybe take a little yellow out of the grasses??

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    Very cute subject, i like the pose of it and the way you composed the frame. If you could get rid of the 2 yellow flowers it would be better, sinec they draw a bit the atention from the subject. Also that dark part in the ULC it is a bit distracting, perhaps it could be cloned out?

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    Love the image, I don't know how you could improve it. Thank you for sharing, John.
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    HI John -- really liked this one, sweet pose and sweet little creature. loved the vibrant colours and nice details. Agree on the distracting flowers. I particularly didnt like that vignette in top and bottom corners on the Lhs of the frame as viewed.

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