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    Hi, Keep trying.
    1DX 2 - 500F4 IS Hand held.
    F7.1 iso1250 1/2500

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    Not bad. What AF point or pattern did you use? How large a crop? You might want to try to open up the shaded side of the face just a bit (without over-doing it).

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    Hi Arthur, thanks a lot. ı am reading from you using 10$ 1dx mk ıı Af settings. ps could be better.
    with love

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    hi, upload
    upload

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    Like the head on view. The flat wing pose is nice. The repost looks sharper to my eye.

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    Hi Volkan ... I think you did well in capturing this species , bet they are flying fast .
    I do like the low POV , think the comp needs to go wider . The sky is nice in the OP , the bird does look a bit underexposed with very dark tones and the all channels are slightly clipped in the darks . Depending on the captured image .... I would go less heavy in the contrast and keep the blacks less heavy .

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    Hi, thank your for criticizes. Your views broaden my horizons.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Andreas Liedmann View Post
    Hi Volkan ... I think you did well in capturing this species , bet they are flying fast .
    I do like the low POV , think the comp needs to go wider . The sky is nice in the OP , the bird does look a bit underexposed with very dark tones and the all channels are slightly clipped in the darks . Depending on the captured image .... I would go less heavy in the contrast and keep the blacks less heavy .

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    Agree. Here is a less contrasty more natural version. I started with the RAW file and converted it in Capture One. With a bit of canvas added at the top it works out to a 50% crop.

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    Volkan, I would advise less contrast and less saturation. with love, artie


    Volkan, daha az kontrast ve daha az doygunluk öneriyorum. aşkla, aşk, artie
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    Hey Artie ... nice job and close to what I would bring the image . The rest is personal preference in tones and colors ....

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    hi Arthur, thank you again, nice person. You did a lot of work in bird photography. you have done very good works. the whole world watched this. ı follow you in 2009 and 2020. thank you on behalf on nature, birds and photographers. the world is always at war, bot love and love will prevail fraternal. photography became a reason.

    Thanks Andreas.

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