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    Another one from my Mara trip last year. small crop for composition.
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    Hi Sanjeev ... solid head portrait .
    Overall color and Tones are looking ok to me , I might have treated them differently for my taste but leave that to you . The annoying flies are a nice addition and adding reality and interest ... IMHO.
    You have controlled the blacks and whites quite good for the most part .... here and there are some blown HL ( that you have recovered ) that are looking odd .
    Sharpening is looking slightly too strong in the face .... for my taste , looks perfect in the shoulder region ..... ???!!

    BG is too smooth .... normally no need for NR at Iso 1600 with that kit .

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    Wow that is a close up and a half! I like the colours, my first impression was that the fur looked rather coarse, so as Andreas said probably a little over-sharpened.

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    Thanks Guys. Andreas I gave 2 rounds of sharpening after resizing 30, 0.3 and 0 values USM. DPP sharpening was set to zero. I had reduced NR in DPP by lowering the luminance NR to 2 from default 9.

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    Sanjeev ... thanks for the info , just for explaining my thoughts ... even at 300% magnification there is no grain visible in the BG gave me the impression you used NR .

    Regarding the sharpening ... does not matter how much or less you used , I still think the fine fur in the face does look at too much sharpened . Really like the structure on the shoulder fur . Told you in the past .. reduce the sharpening in the white fringe , by splitting the sharpened layer into darken and lighten blend mode . Then reduce the lighten layer to 50 % opacity . What is causing the " oversharpeing effect " is the light fringe .

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    OK thanks for the explanation Andreas.

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    Hi Sanjeev, will leave colour, noise etc, with you and Andreas. Jon, Cheetah fur is quite coarse, almost like wire wool.

    perhaps if you had moved a bit more to the right, the magenta blob may have been hidden by the head, a bit distracting. Like the framing and inclusion of the flies.

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    Hey Sanjeev .... if you like fire me the raw just for the sport

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    Whoa look at those flies. Nice framing and i like the background.

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    I will send the RAW today.
    Last edited by Sanjeev Aurangabadkar; 04-15-2020 at 03:24 AM.

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    Loved the head shot here Doc.

    I agree with Steve reg the Cheetah fur being coarse, and hence sharpening should be treated carefully , to me which appears a bit too much. That blob behind the ear is a real distraction and I feel it should go.

    But I think you have done quite well in most departments and produced a fine image.

    TFS !

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sanjeev Aurangabadkar View Post
    I will send the RAW today.
    Hurry up Sanjeev .... day is almost over .... LOL .

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