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    Default Short eared owl (Asio flammeus)

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    Hand held, Olympus : E-M1X
    Lens Model : M.300mm F4.0 + MC-14
    Lens focal length : 420 mm
    Focal length in 35 mm film : 841.0mm
    Metering mode : Pattern
    Shutter speed : 1/2000 sec
    Aperture : F6.3
    Exposure mode : Manual exposure
    ISO : 2500
    Exposure bias : -1.3 EV

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    I know many wont, but I love the forest BG, including the big tree and the dappled light on your beautiful subject, like light coming through canopy. I would burn the wing and body just a little where the sun hits the near wing/body and the opposite on that face(just a slight dodge). TFS

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    Hi Jon great that you got the owl in flight ... i am fine with the head angle and the wing position , albeit the head is slightly turned away .

    Detail look good as does the overall color. There is some blue/cyan in the really distracting big trunk ... i bet you wished he was not there . Only really chance is to make the dark side less obvious ... not removing it .
    And i am with David about the lights/HL in the owl .... needs a bit of burning for more detail .

    TFS Andreas

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    Hi Jon, good flight pose showing the raised wings, and in turn, the underwing feather detail. The Owl pops nicely from your BG. My only nit would be wishing there was a touch of light on the face.

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    Thanks everyone, I am inclined to agree with your critique/comments. I did in fact quite considerably burn the under- wing and I did lift the face. I'll have another look but from what I recall I felt any more burning and things started going cloudy. I exposed far to the right as possible at capture.

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    The pose is nice and the background is what it is but it portrays the scene as you saw it. Really wish for a head turn towards you to get some light on the face. Im sure you did too. Nice and sharp.

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    You really needed the bird flying the other way given the lighting; that shaded, turned face just doesn't connect. The backing tree is unfortunate, but the aforementioned faces issues are more pressing for me. I have nothing of this
    species. I see them every once in a while but always way out over the marsh while I am birding.

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