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    I shot this image at a local beach about 30 mins after sunrise. It was a very cold and windy day. Even at low tide, the shorebird numbers were quite low and the birds were very skittish. I laid prone on a part of the beach with lots of pools and green moss, hoping that the birds would eventually get acclimatized to my presence. The birds just didn't cooperate, but as I was about to give up, a solitary Dunlin walked right up to me, giving great views and almost filling the frame. Unfortunately, the spooky behaviour of the other birds meant that I had a 1.4x TC on. Ideally, I'd opt for a slightly looser crop, but the detail and light in this frame really caught my eye. I added a hair of canvas around the bird for composition and cloned out a few distracting specular highlights on the bill.

    Camera - Nikon D850
    Focal Length - 700mm
    Aperture - f/8
    Shutter Speed - 1/2500s
    ISO - 1000
    Handheld
    Manual, Auto ISO
    ~90% of Full-frame

    As always, all comments & CC are appreciated
    Last edited by Aditya Sridhar; 03-04-2020 at 01:55 PM.

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    Hi Aditya, great low perspective, and I like the walking pose with the slightly raised foot. The feather detail shows up nicely, and overall, nice and sharp. I do like the colour of the water.

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    The low angle is great. Love that blue background. Nice to have a slightly raised foot. Framing is right on.

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    Nice low shooting angle and details.. The bird just does not look very happy to me....
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    A fine shot Aditya, exposure is good, personal taste I think I would lower contrast a tad on the bird. I like the foam on the legs. I appreciate the eye is dark but maybe just a hint of eye doctoring to demonstrate the pupil v iris.

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    Really like this one Aditya, nice low perspective and the out of focus surf makes for a beautiful background. I really like the tiny bit of green in the foreground too, my only criticism would be that I'd have liked to have seen the bird walking towards you, still a really nice frame though and the head angle is great.

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    Great low view, the blue background really makes him pop. He was certainly very close, so you handled the composition challenge well. I'm a stickler for sharp legs, but I understand it was tough to get them in focus with
    him so close. I agree with lowering contrast on the bird; he looks the slightest bit crunchy on the back. Details are otherwise excellent.

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    Terrific low POV.
    I love the foam on the legs. The blues are very nice and work well with the rather plain bird.
    I also like that lone ilttle brown feather on the flank.
    Nice catchlight.
    Your PP work is excellent and I can not tell you added canvas.
    I would not have noticed a contrast issue had I not read the previous comments. Still looks Ok to me,
    Gail

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    Nice low POV. I like the raised foot, but would have like to see it out just a bit more to be picky. Foam on the legs is very cool. Nice rich colors. Maybe a little crunchy on the details, but not so noticeable either. TFS

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