Hi James Just back the saturation for the yellows !!!
Love the pose with the look back Might give a little more room all around Sweet combination of colors Got a winner here !!
Not sure about the point of focus Seems the shoulder is the sharpest? Sure wish you would have used a higher shutter speed and deal with the noise
later !!! btw in this cases I always opt for shooting wide open since I'm more concerned with sharpness than dof !!!!