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    Default Red Wing Blackbird

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    Processed with Dpp 4,Photoshop,Neat image.Cloned out some reeds on the left. Comments and critiques appreciated.
    Canon 5D Mark 1V
    500 f/4 L Is
    700 mm
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    Iso 1000

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    Super engaging look from him! Can't get a better head-on view! The frame does feel a bit cool to me, and I'd like to see the bird moved up in the frame since the top part feels really empty. Bird could
    also be moved to the right a bit.

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    I like the head on look but i think it needs to be sharper....
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    Very nice pose and the clean BG is awesome. I agree that the bird needs to be moved up slightly. Sharpening the head would also help. I see a halo near the bird's right leg - should be an easy fix in PP. Nice work on controlling the reds. I'd probably add some warmth to the image too. Well done, Kevin!

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    Classic red wing on some cattails. Killer background. Like the head on pose as well.

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