Hi Jon, things are definitely improving with the IQ, but to me you need to go warmer on the WB and magenta on the Tint. Looks a tad dark, but that could be the laptop. I think I'm OK on the framing, but perhaps a sliver off the top?
Really nice view of this guy. IQ is pretty good, but I can see some noise creeping in. Background is wonderful. I agree about the framing comments: too centered and too much above. Curious what an 8x10 vertical would look like, if you have the canvas.
Thanks to everyone for your suggestions and comments they are always welcomed and appreciated, I have prepared a repost incorporating some suggestions offered:-
I think the OP is much better than your repost. Repost is too yellow for my taste.
Definitely like the composition of the repost better but would still take a bit more off the top.
The harrier is nice and sharp and I like the ruffled feathers very much.
Very nice BG and light.
Gail