I would dodge the dark areas in the BG .
I, too, wish the head of the front crane did not merge with the second crane's wing but otherwise an OK image.
Looks like you had some heat haze?
Gail
Such lovely birds, a species which has escaped my lens to this point. I like the reeds below, but the trees behind aren't blurred enough to make the cranes pop. f/10 certainly didn't help with that, but I imagine you wanted a decent DOF
to get the staggered birds in focus. There is also a lot of overlap between the subjects; more separation would be better. Colors also seem a bit flat given the bright sun.
Thanks John, Gail, and Dorian. Gail I took your advice and dodged the dark areas, and Dorian I blurred the background slightly. Not seeing the heat haze, Gail.