Hi Carole - These are great looking birds - Here's another take.
Personal taste - I dont think the guy in the BG adds anything to the image and also the OOF foreground is distracting. - for my tastes the image is the main guy.
So I have cropped diferently - did some QM'S to remove some distarcting BG elements and lighten sharpened teh eye.
I like the juxtaposition of the two birds and this image has some puch (contrast) to it. Maybe a bit off the bottom.
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And I wanted more off the bottom! How's that for confusing?!!! I like the original with both birds and your title cracked me up. I do find so much of the FG (foreground) being blurred to be distracting so suggested the tighter crop from the bottom. Very funny image!