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    Female Cardinal
    Sony 7RM4 FE 100-400mm F4.5-5.6 GM + 1.4x (560mm)
    hand held 1/1250 @ f/8.0
    ISO 1000
    Central Park NYC
    10/19/2019 10:40 am
    Last edited by david spital; 10-30-2019 at 06:23 AM. Reason: update image

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    David, looks like you were dealing with some harsh light but you got the birds exposure nice. I would suggest and 2x3 crop ratio and give the bird a bit more room on the right.
    I would also remove the distracting elements in the BG (light spots and the dried hanging stuff) also tone down the mushrooms a bit if you choose.

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    Nice pose on the bird. The dark background is very nice. Not a fan of the perch or the seed.

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    Lovely lighting and contrast on this lady. The details on the face is very nice as well. However, perch is a bit distracting, and I can take or leave the seed. Bird is also cramped in the frame, most notably at right.

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    Thanks for the helpful critique. I've updated the image using the suggestions.
    Just to say shooting in Central Park NYC you are dealing with a dense wooded environment and very low light.
    The parameters are challenging.
    Last edited by david spital; 10-30-2019 at 06:30 AM.

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