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Nice light and you got most of the bird in focus. Image does need a bit of CW rotation if you follow the DOF line.
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Colin - Thank you. I thought the same but the image is actually level - what you're seeing is the natural slope of the beach
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Good point but I always try to make the image look level where there isn't context to show that slope, if it doesn't result in the bird falling over!
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I recognise your story of lying flat on the ground photographing shorebirds and then gaining their trust to the point that they come too close haha! It's a beautiful thing though.
You got a very nice shot here. The low and soft light is very good, nice setting and low shooting angle. I would not do anything to the yellow patch on the bottom of RHS, it gives the image depth. I'm a bit less in love of the yellow patch higher up on the RHS but would still leave it as the image will look very plain without any of those elements. Otherwise you got good details, pose and exposure.
I agree that it would look better with a CW rotation as the slope isn't visible in the image.
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Hi Aditya, I love the soft light and especially the raised foot. The single thing that bugs me about this image is the fairly large halo-like smudge that merges with the bird's lower back. BTW, this is a juvenile just starting to molt to first winter plumage.
with love, artie
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Thanks everyone for the feedback! I'll do some CW rotation and see how it looks.
Artie - I'll probably dodge/clone that blob out. Also interesting to know that it's a juvenile bird. I should probably do more research on my subjects before I photograph them
Thanks for the info!