Well i t looks pretty sharp to me Paul, light looks good too. the brighter patch on the belly doesn't trouble me but it might be a little better if toned down a little.
The sun is just a bit too high for my taste. It has caused that line of shadow across the face/neck which is unfortunate.
The wing position is excellent.
The blown out areas on thigh, belly and rump need to be addressed.
Gail