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    This image was created in Ithaca, New York on 7/12/19 at 6:49PM. Image processed in Lightroom and Photoshop.

    Hand held, Full frame.

    Canon 5D MarkIV
    Sigma 150-600 Contemporary
    600mm
    ISO 1600
    f6.3
    1/500sec

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    One stunner after another, John

    Love the framing here with all that space in front of the fawn. Background is superb, soft and smooth but retaining just enough detail so we know it's real

    A beautiful portrait with good head angle, nice pose with the left ear pointing slightly forward, seems the subject is paying attention to something.

    Great detail and the colours are just great, I like everything about this - thank you so much for sharing!

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    Gabriela Plesea

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    Hi John, again another clean, well executed frame with great detail. The yellow 'blobs' in the BKG are slightly distracting and just blowing some colour over them to knock them back would help. Overall the light looks very even and so the actual head lacks that 'form' so it provides shape, if you know what I mean, so you could address this with some simple layer adjustments. As presented I think you were just on the cusp with the DoF, looking at the side of the mouth I think f/8 would have been better, but it's not a deal breaker.

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    Steve

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    Very nice work John! I like it as presented

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    Lovely shot John, I would suggest a select subject, select & mask ->curves/luminosity and play around to give a little more expression the fur. It doesn't need much but a little helps.

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